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| BEST PART | RJ45 | 11/14/2008 - 11:25am |
| LMAO!!!!!! | spychick8 | 11/14/2008 - 10:37am |
| maybe im just different than most women..... | spychick8 | 11/13/2008 - 10:51am |
Crush!
Submitted by Antonio88 on Sun, 05/13/2007 - 6:39pm.
The face of the fly on the windscreen
The hair pulled away by the brush
Imprisoned by your emotions
You have been caught by the crush
You stand at the edge of a canyon
Above a safety net of barb
The fear of ignorance in persuit
Either way your heart is scarred
Jump! will you soar like an eagle
Fall to your death down the grand
Makes no difference how high you jump
because your fate is in her hand.
One heart, under a nail polished thumb
One heart, still beating her name
The angel summons to heaven or hell
Your heart will it ever be the same
She dances around in mysterious ways
A lick of her lips makes you plea
Locked in the waves of the green sea eyes
At the mercy of the power of "she"
The face of the fly on the windscreen
The hair pulled away by the brush
Imprisoned by your emotions
You have been caught by the crush
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Antonio,
Antonio,
This poem just draws you in and makes you want to read it. The choice of words is perfect and you couldn't have made it any better. You are a very good writer because it all comes from your heart and deep down in your soul; this is the only way a real writer would have done it. Excellent job!
-Nikki
This is truly beautiful i
This is truly beautiful i never knew you had such talent
xxx
Francesca Lucia,
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